The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/13
Wow! This was excellent in its deliver and content. I was pulled in and found this a fascinating read...brilliant!

God bless~
11/05/13
Wow! Very well done!
I don't know if this is autobiographical, but it reads as if it is.
The last paragraph is a little preachy. If you could show the same thought with some kind of action instead of telling, it would be stronger.
Great writing!
11/07/13
Pauline,

I'm so happy for you this was a beautiful piece that reflected an inspirational and prolific message! I knew this was a winner!!

Congratulations! God Bless~
Congratulations on the first place and the editor's choice! It was a powerful piece.I can imagine that many missionaries have questioned their call when they think their gifts are being wasted. It must be a hard dilemma to face.
11/12/13
I really enjoyed your story and reminder that God births us exactly where He needs us. Although some are called to travel into the mission fields far away, most, I believe are to take advantage of the harvest that exists all around them.