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My eyes are filled with tears. This is lovely, sweet...wonderful! Great job.
Very nice. I kind of wish the ending was longer but I felt you made the older woman so real:) I was glad to see she didn't give up trying.
Lovely story, leaving us to hope for her daughter's salvation made for a realistic ending. (BTW my mum was saved in her twighlight years when Jesus visited her late one night!)
For us all to have such a heart to share the gospel with our loved ones. I was praying right along side Mamie!
Family is always the hardest when it comes to witness....but Mamie didn't give up. Her faith is an example to me.

Beautifully told story that kept my interest the whole way. A creative and enjoyable take on the topic. Well done.
oh wow - powerful!
A bittersweet story - very emotional, but with a feeling of hope at the end. There are a couple of spots where you could tighten your POV, but overall, this is well-done.
So touching....... Just beautiful. And couldn't we all identify with her daughter who was so grief stricken.