The Official Writing Challenge
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Perfect title for this endearing story of how lives can change--and how those who are pointing fingers lose out on some wonderful relationships because they are too busy blaming instead of forgiving. That's the message I took away from this entry---good job.
I really enjoyed this multi-layered story with so many messages throughout. Nicely done, loved the wrap up at the end. Good job.

God bless~
This is a great story. I'm sure we all need reminding to not judge based on what we hear. You do a splendid job of doing that without coming off as preachy. My only red ink would be some of the dialog felt a little stiff. Just try to relax it a tad and make it more natural. You did a great job of writing on topic. The story flowed nicely and the ending left me with a warm fuzzy feeling. Congratulations on placing 6th in your level and 24 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)