The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story...I would love to read the book! As usual, you write an interesting, humorous, well done piece! Great take on the topic.

BLessings, Lynn
Loved your word "play." You did a great job staying on topic.

The idea of coal looking for sparks is quite clever. Nicely done.
Nicely done and nicely written. This was an interesting and clever entry. I enjoyed the last line especially!

God bless~
This is a winner! How clever, how wonderful the characters, and how HOT the story! Well done . . .
I think you nailed the genre here. The pacing and short senrences and phrasing are perfect. You packed quite a bit of topic reference in here!Very funny and quite an entertaining read. Well done.
I'm smiling. Nice job.
That was a grand ride on the word play train! Unique, fresh, and ultimately entertaining.
This story made me chuckle! What a wonderfully entertaining read! Well written, funny, witty and fresh.
Congrats on your HC! I knew you would "track down" a win.
Congratulations on ranking 4 in your level and 28 overall!