The Official Writing Challenge
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Very moving and heartfelt piece.
I was expecting him to toss a stone in her memory, but your ending was ironclad offering the painful truth of life and love. Very good work.
I sure hope this is straight fiction, because I ache inside. Thanks for digging deep! Great story.
This touched me deeply...profound and powerful.

God Bless~
Very hard to leave a comment when you are crying and typing at the same time - talk about tugging on the heartstrings! How is it possible to still be alive when you are in so much pain? This a question that haunts many - including me- and I am reminded of the very real suffering of many people. A powerful story.
Congratulations on ranking 20 overall! (The highest rankings can be found in the message boards)
You took my heart and made it yours. This is beautiful and breathtakingly heart melting. Congratulations!
This is a tender, painful story which is very well written. Congratulations on your HC.
Thank you all for you very encouraging words!