The Official Writing Challenge
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Very clever and entertaining tale. I enjoyed it, and especially the way you closed, nicely done.

God bless~
I think this was a brillant bit of writing. Loved it!
Loved your story! I think you are a great writer, very entertaining story!,
I enjoyed this. You developed your characters very well and I like the way it ended. Good job!
I'm glad for your title. It makes me look deeper than the sheer enjoyment of reading your excellent story. And it is excellent!
Good point! LOL
Exceptional story and excellent writing! Thanks for sharing your talent.
Breathing became a wee bit difficult as I read through this - much relief when "os scent" was explained to be accent. Most clever!

Loving you in through and because of Jesus, the Christ . . .

Have you "thrown a brick"?
Awesome job! Congratulations Jack!
Fabulous!! So deserving of a first place win. Congratulations!!!
GREAT entertainment, creativity, and humor. Super congrats on top honors.
Congratulations on recognition for an exceptionally well written story with great description, suspense, and humor.
Very fun and entertaining. Sometimes, I was a little slow on picking up the accent. Congratulations on your 1st place MC award!
Congratualtions---Great job.
Congratulations! Well deserved!
KJV Philippians 4:8 "Finally, brethren, whatsoever things are true, whatsoever things are honest, whatsoever things are just, whatsoever things are pure, whatsoever things are lovely, whatsoever things are of good report; if there be any virtue, and if there be any praise, think on these things."

Thank you for glorifying God with your true, honest, just, pure, lovely, good, virtuous and praiseworthy winning entry! God bless you.

Love and verbal hugs,

You built the suspense brilliantly as you drew us into the ominous scenario, and with equal brilliance you wove in the caroet of the punchline - before pulling it out from beneath my feet. great work and a well-deserved EC first place.
Vay ta go Yack!
Congratulations on your EC win with this splendid tale.
I am still thinking about the message of this piece. I so appreciate the depth and the use of allegorical elements.I especially appreciated the setting and background as part of the allegory. Allegory is very difficult to do well. The story has to stand on its own. Very much deserved first place. Bravo!
Congratulations on your win which was well-deserved for this creative and amusing story. Well done!
Your story was even more fun to read the second time around! Congratulations on your well deserved 1st Place Editor's Choice. Blessings!
This is a great article. I began to read it out loud and picked up the conversation immediately. Congratulations on your first place and on a superb piece of writing.
Congratulations! God bless~
These well crafted words really deserved the first place. Congratulations!
I'm amazed at how much you packed into this story and still qualified for the 750 word limit. I was drawn in from the first sentence and entertained through the closing words. I'll expect to see you in the Master Level soon. Congrats on your deserving win.
Congratulations on a wonderful story and the first place. Keep Writing!