The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done, thanks for this well written entry.

God bless~
Wow, I really like this piece. Action, conflict, strong characters...Very creative.I think you have a great chance at placing with this. A small bit of red ink: vial(small bottle) rather than veil(art. of clothing)bolt rather than volt would be better(1 volt is less than a AA battery - not very powerful) illusions rather than allusions(an indirect reference)All minor points that do not at all diminish the power of this piece. Well done!
Wow what a powerful story you have written. You drew me in right at the beginning and had chills running down my spine. Like you, I too, believe that there are horrible things just around the corner. Thankfully for those who believe, Jesus is and always will be our Savior. Good job.
Congrats. God Bless~
Congratulations on placing fourth in your level and for ranking 20 overall!
Chilling . . .

Congratulations! May God bless you richly . . .