The Official Writing Challenge
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Such an important lesson and message here in this well written entry. Thank you.

God bless~
I'd guess that this is a familiar story for so many parents. I did anticipate the ending as soon as I heard the squeal of tires. For this mom things turned out okay in the end. For many, however, hateful words will linger as the last words to say to a loved one. Your story really shows that message and how important it is to realize how damaging words can be. Nice job.
At first I wasn't sure where your story would end up so I kept reading. I was relieved to find that the girls were okay. Good job keeping my attention! Good lesson as well.