The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh what a wonderful story! did this really happen?
Great story. The tone was one of authenticity...wondering if it was based on an actual event. Nicely done.
God bless~
This is a great story. I liked how you showcased the MC's personality. The only red ink I have is be careful that the title doesn't give away the ending. I was expecting to hear the line from Extreme Makeover-driver, move that bus!" I think you did a great job of bringing the story full-circle. Your scriptures were a perfect fit for your message.
Congratulations on your ribbon and for ranking 12 overall!
Congrats. God bless~