The Official Writing Challenge
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You made some good points in this piece. I was confused, though, by why a portion of what you wrote is actually the words of someone else on another website. Perhaps there could be a different way to illustrate your point. The prayer at the end was excellent.
I like the idea of that verse in Hebrews meaning more than just getting together for church services. The first sentence in the 4th paragraph (after the quote) is a bit run-on. Probably would have been stronger if stated in two sentences.
Beautiful job with bringing forward an important and vital message. Loved your prayer and how it concluded with all points that you mentioned earlier. Nicely done.

God bless~