The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! I'm not a big poetry person often feeling I'm missing something but this piece spoke volumes to me. I had chills and felt goosebumps popping out. The line -- She could Keep the picnic nature of her
Cut and paste religion, is so powerful and really makes the poem on-topic. Not because you used the word picnic but for what that word stands for universally. Very creative!
Beautiful! Nothing more to say...Great job. God Bless~
WOW! So many great phrases in this poem. You did an excellent job with this enjoyable entry with many truths. God bless!
There is a lot of truth here,written with beautiful words. It seems to have much thought put into it. Good writing.
This was so good! I was paused by the line "She traded in a real crown for
A counterfeit tiara;" ... i wonder how many of us do that at different times in our walk, often pursing the temporal and forsaking the eternal. The flow of this piece was solid throughout.

An excellent piece of writing!
Congratulations! God bless~
Congratulations. This was a very good entry, well-deserving of your placement.
Congrats Raymond! Good job!
Congratulations Sir! A well deserved "highly commended" recognition!
Congratulations on your HC. Well done.
Congratulations on your 'Highly Commended'. I really enjoyed your poem. There are some beautiful turns of phrase in it. Well done.
Congratulations on your HC and for placing 16th overall!