The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
I can see where you were trying to go with this, and if I read it again I might get it, but the idea is great-putting Jonah and Ninevah into the future.
11/02/05
Very creative and interesting. I'll bet with more words, the back story would be clearer, but I did enjoy reading this futuristic re-telling of Jonah.
Haha! Great concept! Sure to please the younger crowd especially!
11/03/05
Sci-Fi is one very hard subject to fly around in.. I found it interesting as as Jonah showed up... not bad. a little rework could make it a very pleasing read.. Again, very good.
11/03/05
I enjoyed this and think it could be a whole book, right? Clever on the future names of old characters and places. Good!
11/03/05
A blast off from imagination station! Very creative yeggy.
I've often thought the book of Jonah stops mid-story. Now I know what happens! LOL. I don't usually read sci-fiction, so to capture and keep my attention (as you've done) shows that you've obviously done well. Good on you Yeggy.
11/04/05
Truth is, Sci fi is not usually my thing either, but I loved the Jonah thing, and really loved this line: "She’d almost forgotten the passenger." So real, and a great way to introduce Jonah. :) Karen
Likewise sci-fi isn't my usual cup of tea... but I sipped to the last drop and I am so glad I did...
11/05/05
LOL -great! :)
11/13/05
WOW! What a retelling. What excitement!
This is great stuff, Yeg!