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This is a great take on the topic. I enjoyed it and was pulled in right away. I liked how the friend witnessed without becoming sanctimonious. Nice job.
Great job with this entire piece. The friend managed to bring forth her point without pontificating. Perfect blend of sincerity and meaning. Nicely done.

God Bless~
Hi -

Very good job of weaving this piece into a satisfying conclusion. Pondering - food for thought - realization -- yes, very good job.

Please note:

Typically, 9/11 is not spelled out Nine Eleven.

Heaven and hell aren't typically capitalized unless they begin a sentence. In the Holy Bible - KJV, those words aren't capitalized unless at the start of sentences.
Nice take on the topic showing the risk the yet unsaved is taking in not receiving Christ. Well done.