The Official Writing Challenge
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You talked about what fragrance is, but there wasn't much else, especially to encourage or challenge readers. Something deeper is needed. Also, be sure to use spell-check before posting.
There was much to like here; it was very informative. I liked the little Nero poem at the end; would you consider writing this whole piece in verse? By the way, "scent", not "sent."
I think if you were to add a few more details, descriptions to add flavor to the story, this would be fine. I liked the poem about Nero, and I think that was the little extra something that made the story interesting. You did well with it. God bless ya, littlelight
I think you need to take some of the information and facts here and weave abit more into them.:)
Really neat and interesting details on the topic, left me wanting more information. Thanks for posting.