The Official Writing Challenge
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You did an excellent job with this. I felt the anger and despair immediately. You painted picture after picture for me. I felt I was right there watching it all unfold. The ending showed hope but was still open-ended. I enjoyed this a lot.
Loved the ending. I like when an ending is open to interpretation. Thanks, I truly enjoyed this. Good job.

God Bless~
Scene by scene the story unfolded. You held me there with Josh yet understanding both sides. I love the open ending as well. Plus Snickers are my favorites.
Congratulations! God Bless~
Congratulations for ranking 11th overall! (So close! )
This story has such a strong characterizations! I love the subtleties, the gradual distancing, the flicker of uncertainty. Very well done! I enjoyed this story.