The Official Writing Challenge
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This is stunning, a powerful story and a great surprise ending. Well done.
This is an excellent story of forgiveness and acceptance, and the importance of family. Your descriptions were great, and I loved the ending.

I'm not sure that it was exactly spot on the topic, but that may just be me and the way I'm reading it. Other than that, this is just gorgeous, and would make a wonderful book telling the tale of the generations of the family. I loved this, well done.
Wow! Wonderful story.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 4 and 11th overall!