The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/12
Very nice piece of writing and a wonderful message. I like the contrast that you create and the connections to everyday issues that truly don't matter.

This blessed me. Thanks!
01/27/12
I adore this piece, and the last two lines took my breath away.

01/27/12
Profoundly truthful! Thanks for sharing! God bless!
01/28/12
Excellent entry with a very powerful message. Well done.
01/30/12
Really liked the simplicity of your article. Very thought provoking. Really like the succinct writing as well as the spacing. Well done. Hope you win a ribbon.
02/03/12
I like it It kept me wondering. like the end made me feel good. thanks for your time to read me poem.