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This story warms my heart (and makes it ache at the same time), especially knowing it's based on a true story. Great job expressing your characters and setting. I felt like I was there, and that these people were my friends, or at least that I wanted them to be.
Fantastic story - it moved me beyond words, and it pulled at my heart strings.
It didn't surprise me that it was based on a true story...they are always the best. Truth - powerful.
God Bless~

I like the way Luke found a way to honor double commitments, not casting aside one for the other. Great story!
Nicely paced story. Love the phrase the diplomat and the nanny. Hope these two make it. You'll have to keep us posted!
Great story! I love the last sentence. How sweet!