The Official Writing Challenge
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EXCELLENT story! Love the way you use your computer virus incident to lead in to the 'real problem'. Well done. Great use of the 'cue word'.
Brilliant entry, and just a fabulous piece of writing. I loved the story, the message and the ending.
Great job. God Bless you~
Nice movement from the personal story to the spiritual lesson. Thought provoking. Well done.
There are some good reminders here.

Instead of just telling about the computer virus you had, I'd have made it into more of a story, perhaps with some dialogue. That helps make things "come alive" for the reader.

Good job.
This is a wonderful devo. You have done a great job at using descriptions that many people could understand. My only thought is using so many scriptures may be a turn off for someone just discovering Jesus. Your prayer is wonderful. You did a great job in delivering an on-topic message.
Loved the spiritual application with this week's topic. I appreciated the prayer at the end. Excellent job! God bless!
Nicely done Edward - Congratultions! God Bless~
Sorry EDMOND- I wish there was a way to edit!

Congratulations again.
God Bless~
Congratulations on placing with this great devotional! Well done, Edmond.