The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my goodness- I simply LOVED this! Beautiful job and flowed so well. This is clearly one I will read over and over again. Thank you... Fantastic job. God Bless~
Yeah flowed very well, well done
Beautiful! I love this...the message and the flow of the words.
This is wonderful! Great idea for the topic and great thought provoking message.
I love how you've related all aspects of Facebook so perfectly to our relationship with Jesus. The stanza with "friend" and "unfriend" is my favorite. Your message is so relevant with all generations using Facebook. I want to hit "like" on this. I'm adding this to "my favorites"!
Sweet, I really enjoyed reading it and I'm not usually a fan of poetry. Well done. It's been busy with the holidays and all; I'm glad I made time to check this particular submission out---your poem made my heart smile.