The Official Writing Challenge
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Sounds like an excerpt from a science fiction novel. Well written, intriguing and imaginative.
Very intriguing and compelling work. It compels me to wish for the next serving, because you have compacted so much material in here that is just begging for further exposure...
I loved this. There was so much confidence in your writing I had no trouble accepting this alternate reality.

What was interesting is that the beautiful descriptive words (which I can't remember now) that you used in the first paragraph, reminded me of a friend who had a dream about a white dress in a window, which glimmered with such color and spark.
Congratulations on winning first place. Without a doubt an "out of the box" concept, style, and craftsmanship!
Congratulations on your 1st place and EC win for this well written entry!
Thank you all for your encouraging comments. I am always a little nervous when I do this challenge that what I write is not going to have an audience. I am so surprised and pleased to learn I am wrong, especially for this story.