The Official Writing Challenge
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Yay Maggie!!! Good story! Well written! God bless!
This was a great story. I found myself cheering for the MC.

Remember to capitalize Mom when it's being used as a name.

Although I didn't really see the topic(but this has happened a few times this week and I wonder if I took the topic too literally) this was a well-written piece with great conflict and a wonderful message. The characters and dialog felt very realistic and it was easy to picture it all in my head.
Nicely written. Good job, I enjoyed this. God Bless~
Great story! Glad Maggie gained boldness from the word of God and stood up to Katie! Enjoyed the read!
We need to get this! Top Story.
You've covered so many internal steps towards a positive response, and brought us with you all the way. Well done.
This was a terrific story and I truly enjoyed the MC's triumph, though I would have liked to have seen more in regard to Katie's response. That part went by a bit quickly for me, but on the whole it's an excellent story.
This is a story that is well worth reading. I agree, you may have missed the topic. Sometimes, though, the value of the story isn't in winning EC but in showing someone a better way to live a Christian life. Good story.