The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh this is wonderful. It had me holding my breath. It's a great ending too. Outstanding!
Very nice! I enjoyed it...Good job. God Bless you~
Captivating story! Inspiring message! Terrific job!
This piece held me in suspense until the very end. I thought I knew how it would end, but I was wrong! Nice twist. Lovely message. Made me consider how often my own character is tested, daily.
Taking stands aren't always easy, but they are always right. Good story to remind us of that truth. Good job!
Enjoyed the story. Great job.
Moving story! Kept me engaged and wondering where it might head next! Great lead up to the end!
Congratulations for ranking 12th in level 3!
Well done, Carole. The story had me engaged from beginning to end. Loved the suspense built up. Congratulations. Right on topic.
Carole, I held my breath almost through the whole thing. I had no idea where this was going but I had to see it through! Your progression and timing were perfect. You laid the groundwork carefully and then let us in on the thorny subject which we'd been anticipating but almost dreading! It was a wonderful exercise in writing for you and an exciting ride for us, your readers. Kudos!