The Official Writing Challenge
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The rhythm and rhyme in this poem are well done! Very enjoyable to read. The second line cracked me up and I was hooked from there on out.
"If all the “if onlys” on life’s fading pages
Could undo the messes man caused through the ages--" Love those lines - very powerful. Really makes you think about the consequences of our actions. Nice!
Ahhhh, but if Eve didn't do it, someone else along the line would have! :) Loved this light-hearted poem that carries a powerful message. Good job!
Congratulations for placing 10th in Masters and 14th overall!