The Official Writing Challenge
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If ever there was comedy of errors and mishaps, this was it!. At one point I thought you introduced too many "errors" that added nothing to the story, and made it unrealistic. Ex: "the flower girl picked her nose."
Perhaps, "and neither did his color" would work better than, "never did his color."
The title did not pull me in, but the story held my interet, even though I felt the ending fell a bit short of expectation - in my opinion.:-) Loved your MC!
Cute Story! After everything had gone wrong "the church bells rang that day," I like that. I remember, on my wedding day, saying, "At this point, if the church comes down around us, I don't care. I'm getting married today."
Lots of life and lots of fun pictures throughout.
That was an adorable story which resembled a wedding my husband and I attended last year! LOL I enjoyed it, and glad it all worked out in the end. God Bless~
Oh...I just ended up feeling so sorry for the bride! But I enjoyed the entertaining read!