The Official Writing Challenge
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That had me getting a little nervous as the "killer" tried to get in. Nice ending with the scripture...God Bless~
The frightening scenario you have created here does image the scripture you posted from psalm at the end. Is this possibly based on a true story? I was thinking as I read, Daddy will be home soon and hell secure the locks but God the Father can secure even when earthly locks fail! Interesting read!
This was a great story. My heart thudded while I held my breath. I wanted to read more. You could definitely expand this more. I did notice you used the topic word, earnest, at least three times. Your writing is strong enough that you don't need to use a topic word to show you are on topic. You did a great job with this one. It really was an exciting read.