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07/29/11
Hehehe Oh, this is great. Very nice. You captured sibling rivalry pretty well, I think. :)
Love your ending and the subtle touches of humor throughout. Very nice job.
07/30/11
A fun read which was very enjoyable. Toilet seats down after men but never up after ladies - prejudice!
07/30/11
Great slice of life story with fun characterisations. I enjoyed the self-deprecating humour, but apart from agreeing with Colin's note about prejudice, I'm left with some questions:
Was he your son or was he your mummy?
Were his sisters flushed with success?
A good read. Well done.
Loved the humor and ending. Great job.
08/01/11
Having raised four daghters and one son, I found the story quite amusing. Except my son could have handled all four of his sisters together! Great read! God bless!