The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
Great story! Kept my interest from beginning to end.
My, what skill you have in making ink come to life! Great story...would love to hear more of Shelby.
Wow, very well done. I appreciated how you were able to convey the complexities of the issue in so few words and in such a great setting. Very timely, in fact.
10/24/05
Hi Sandra. I just wanted to stop by and let you know that your entry ranked 23rd overall (out of 135 entries). So well done! There really wasn't much separating the entries in the top 30 - so be encouraged! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Another great effort and to echo my sentiments on the other "Shelby entry" - great detail and dialogue. However, this notion of men from the ANV deserting... hmmmm? :)