The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/11
I never tire of hearing the story about Jesus and the sacrifice he made, and told excellently from the thief on the cross by Jesus. God bless!
07/25/11
Oh what a promise that thief was given from the cross – a life so very different than he had lived on this side of paradise…that would truly be something to ponder in your last thoughts on this earth! I like how you ended it with him saying he KNOWS what Jesus said is true…and we all have that promise that accept Christ…we will be with him when we take out last breath… and just being with Jesus will be paradise! Nicely told!
07/27/11
Love this story, very original POV. Excellent writing!