The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever and creative-loved it! The little girl reminds me of my own daughter, strong willed and passionate about what she feels is right or wrong.:) Cute story!!
Delightful story that is my daughter, still at 43, she hasn't changed. Good coverage of the theme as well.
Oh, the smiles children's perspectives are capable of bringing!! You have presented a fun story of that and left us with a smile! Well done!
Cute! Good job with capturing the voice and confusion of the little girl :-)
Hehe, too funny. Sounds just like something a little kid would say.
What a cute character! I was expecting more conflict between the dad and son, but Sydney's miscommunication was a sweet way to resolve this story.
A cute amusing story of family confusion. Enjoyed! Thanks!
Well-done. An accurate picture of everyday life in a family. Perfect for this week's theme.
Realistic family dialogue and a good story here.
Reminds me of the little girl on 'Outnumbered' on TV. Cute story, enjoyed reading it.
Great imagery! I enjoyed the read very much and was able to imagine how adorable Syd must be, along with the entire story. Excellent piece.
You have sketched your characters with a great sense of credibility.
Hi, never sure if people get messages thought you would definately get this:) Thank you so much for always commenting so nicely on everyones work. I always look forward to seeing your name under my entry! PS. Love this peice:)
Oh this was truly an adorable story. It was entertaining and believable at once. Good Job!

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