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Good story and well written. Thanks for sharing! God bless!
What an engrossing read! I got totally caught up in her pondering and dilemma. I love how she describes the death of her parents as leaving her exposed, like the inside of a sandwich to heaven, because no family elders remains to pray for her, help guide. Well written! Enjoyed!
Congratulations on your Highly Commended award.
Congratulations Cheryl, well done!
Very well written and something that definitely hits a sore spot for many of us. I don't know if losing your parents is something you have gone thru recently, but I certainly have. Within a span of about 2 years my wife and I lost both her parents and the last one of mine. And we felt EXACTLY how you describe it here. I love the idea of your MC using this as instigation to begin a close examination of her own life and choices.