The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/11
Wow! This is great. My favorite so far this week. I love the word pictures you paint from spitting nails to sloshing tea and sari descriptions. And your point is sooo apropos. Excellent job!
05/27/11
Such a delightful tale. I felt like I was there sipping sweet tea and ducking the barbed words a-flying! Loved the ending. God bless!
05/28/11
Loved, Loved, Loved this...the delightful word art of the story and the message it so powerfully speaks! Kudos on this!
05/31/11
Excellent writing- delightful read. Thank you for sharing.
06/02/11
Loved everything about this, but your opening line was a "gotcha"!
06/02/11
well done on placing first... not an easy feat among such talented writers
Well written story. I loved the opening line and the visual at the end.
06/02/11
CONGRATULATIONS! Great job!
06/02/11
Congratulations on your placing. You nailed me withn your opening line, and you keot building the emotion of the dialogue and the reflection right up to the twist at the end. Absolutely number one!