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Topic: Outgoing (05/05/11)
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TITLE: Reaching For You | Previous Challenge Entry
By Amanda Brogan
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Dear One,
I knew that you would never come to me on your own. You’re not one who would pursue a relationship with me. It’s up to me to chase after you, to fight for you, to prove my love to you.
I know that there are others ... others clamoring for your attention. Begging for you to be theirs. Practically ripping your gaze from me. So I know it’s up to me. You would not think of me on your own for there are too many choices. So many who desire your hand.
But I know their hearts. I know that they couldn’t contain the burning love that my own heart holds for you. They’ve never come close to feeling that kind of love.
With every roaring wave that beats against an ocean reef, my heart groans for you. With every countless star that casts a sparkle of jewels in your lovely eyes, my love shines forth.
With every skylark and turtledove and soaring bird that pours its heart in song to the clouds, my voice sings out and calls for you to be mine.
I love you, precious. Mere words could not describe the depth of it. And so I’ll have to show you. I’m sending this message and so much more. I’m reaching out to you. I’m off to fight for your hand.
Holding you for eternity,
Jesus
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With all this blathering of mine I can't even begin to explain how strongly I connected to this piece.
Congrats on placing! :)