The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a nice story that so many people can relate to. I liked how Ellen managed to get Gloria to church.

I did notice, near the end, when everyone was sitting in church you switched from 1st person to 3rd for a sentence or two.

The story had a sweet old fashion feel to it and it was a pleasurable read.
I enjoyed this natural description pf reaching those we care about with the gospel, and its recognition that it's a team effort.