The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing! You have great talent! God bless!
I am not a poet, by any stretch, and I'm definitely not qualified to criticque someone else's poetry and so I am usually reluctant to comment on the ones I come across in the challenge. However, this one drew me in. I don't really know why I enjoyed it, but I did. It seemed a whimsical parody, but flowed as beautifully as any serious minded poem I've ever read.
I don't think I'm making much sense, so let's just leave it at "I like it" a lot, I'm just not smart enough to tell you why. :)
I like it too, and I don't know why either. It just gets a grip. Well done.
This draws me in (immediately with the first word!) and I want to go stare at the ocean. Very provocative and dreamy...I love the images, the word choices and the meter is intriguing
Congratulations on your highly commended award.
Congratulations on your ranking, you obviously affected the judge as well - for positive reasons.