The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this what a great_way to handle humility .I loved your characters and wanted to read more.
Loved your main character and the touch of humor that rolled through the story beside the plastic red Target cart. Well done!
Great descriptions! Georges dialect made me wonder where hes from and how he got to where he is now. I liked how in his simplicity he knows the way to meet anothers need.
A cute amusing story I enjoyed - and very well written. I find your writing very interesting.
Great story! I enjoyed George very much. The details, his accent, and his thoughts all made him come to life. I loved the ending, too. ;)
Congratulations in placing 7th in level 3 and 15th overall.
Three cheers Amanda! Congrats for placing in your level and in the top 30! :)
Couldn't help but love old George! LOL Story shows so many different faces of human nature so well. Enjoyed the read!