The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/11
You have applied a broad brush to a huge subject, and I have enjoyed your word pictures. A couple of paras seem to be too long, especiually when they include questions, which work well to provide a break in thought; and thence a fresh para. No complaints about your insights however. God bless...
This is a lovely devotion that reads like a poem.
03/24/11
Ecclesiastes 3:11 was my inspirational verse for this topic as well. :)

This piece is gorgeously poetic and not only on its way to beautiful ... it has arrived at the destination!

I agree with Noel. A few more paragraphs would be great. But it's still lovely how it is. Awesome writing!