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This is very creative!

I was a bit lost. It took me quite awhile to get the connection between the different sections. Perhaps it would have helped to put an exact date, and given both the local and "universal" time?

Good job with this. I really liked it, after I figured out what was going on.
I enjoyed the credibility of the different localities around the globe - all around the same time - and the insight behind each of the different characters' POV. It shows good imaginative research on your part, for I think your readers will understand each setting - speaking as one who lives just over an hour's drive west of Melbourne Australia...
A very insightful piece on how we consume our time. The last section was especially touching.