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I never tire of reading stories of Adam and Eve, and your rendition especially delightful. I loved your use of imagery, like this beautiful phrasing here: 'Grapes the size of my head dripped a tender, sweet, succulent, thirst quenching jam. I lay on my back and sipped from their nectar.'

I really liked this. The last paragraph stays with me. God Job!
If only Adam had been more adamant...
Great imagery and pacing in your reflection.
Beautiful retelling of the Adam and Eve story.
A great and enjoyable retelling of a familiar Bible story. Loved the imagery throughout this piece and the fun sprinkled in the opening with Adam's coughing. A winner in my estimation!
First place, wow! This piece is fabulous, and ever so well-deserving. Woot! Woot! Congratulations.
Congratulations on your well deserved first place EC award.
Such a beautiful description of life before sin. Congrats!
Outstanding! The tender emotion and longing expressed by the Adam of your rendition is a stark reminder of the loss we all experienced in that moment, and makes more sweet the reconciliation we've been granted. The imagery is wonderful! Congratulations - so well deserved!