The Official Writing Challenge
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And you set the scene beautifully. Very nicely done.
You did a great job, bringing that night to life. You painted a believable picture of what could have possibly happened Nice take on the topic.
You certainly brought a new life to what has become a rather hum-drum story--unfortunately. You caught the secrets of Mary's heart; the fact that there was a deeper instinct urging her sacrifice, although she did it unknowingly. Wonderful!
I like stories that try to get behind the Bible account and tease out feelings and motives of the characters. It challenges me to think deeper.
This was a well-written interpretation of Mary and Martha's story. I also liked the title.
I love the sensory details you included. Wonderful!
Not only did you do a remarkable job telling the story, but I could see it happening and feel Mary's emotions too. Exceptionally well done. I hope this does well in the judging.
Interesting take on the story. Especially with the gossip about Mary thinking the wrong way about Jesus. Lovely choice of words and descriptions.
Mary has always intrigued me and you tell her story so well.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 3!