The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm so sure many people can totally relate to yous MC. I stopped videotaping every second of my kids' life because I found I was missing out on too much. This was a fun read with a very powerful message.
I really enjoyed reading this well written piece. It kept my interest all the way through. I've been Diana three times now and still haven't seen everything on my list. I loved the ending too, but perhaps that's wishful thinking in my case! Well done.
I like your writing - best I've read so far. Super story.
Cute story:)
Does this ever sound familiar! A fun read for sure.
I could see all of this taking place just as you described. The message so important - stop to savor the moment. Let each one never get any better than this. As a side note, your MC checking off number 4...perfect in keeping in character. Charming.
You reminded me of two movies: "If it's Tuesday this must be Belgium," with Suzanne Pleshette; and "Forget Paris," withn Billy Crystal and Debra Winger. You've profiled your characters and built the story through the conflict and the "aawww" ending. Very well done.
What a great story with fun characters, believable dialogue and a sweet ending.
Great job with taking your reader to Paris. Great characterization through dialogue. I enjoyed this very much.
Your characters are so sweet and relatable. Love it - and that last line is pure gold. Well done.
Beautifully written and a zinger of a last line! Congratulations on this well deserving piece.