The Official Writing Challenge
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What a year! It's amazing that when it rains, it pours, but how wonderful that Jesus is always in charge.

If I could offer some red ink, it would See to cut down on the ellipses. Your words are great and show the reader when to hold her breath because something is coming. You don't need the...

Great job on the details and making me feel like I'm back in 1986 with you.
Those kinds of events do seem to make time fly by! Details were great; I felt anxious at times waiting for the next shoe to drop. Great job!
Oh My...By the time I got to the end of this, I was glad that year was now over! :)

This gave me smiles and heartache for you and I must say, you are blessed with fortitude. Enjoyable story.
Oh my .. what a title. You would have to be a dangerous person to know too closely, with all that happening. But seriously, I appreciate your honesty and courage in sharing your story
Congratulations for placing 8th in level 3!