The Official Writing Challenge
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I knew from the beginning that they were going to meet a coffin not a live person, but I still felt like I was punched in the gut when you revealed it for sure. That is outstanding writing, you did a great job setting the scene and mood. Beautiful!!
Tearfully touching.

What a great example of how cyber communication can serve toward the glory of God.

Well done.
Very sad story moving hearts. Although cyber communication can do much, it cannot give that same warmth from a personal touch. You have expressed the emotions in the story very well. Excellent piece.
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 3 and 20th overall!