The Official Writing Challenge
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The first line grabbed me and the rest kept my attention unti the very end. Great job with just the right amount of humor
You have a nice ear for words (e.g. "shredding any reverie") & plays on them ("mind over mattress"). Robin Williams' was pretty good too. :) Thanks a lot...
You have your own brand of humor. LOL! You were doomed from the start. You gotta smile at the Harvey's in our lives. Nessun Dorma is a beautiful song, and a perfect ending to your sleepless night. I enjoyed this!
An engaging, amusing slice of life story. My favorite line: "Im still studying the insides of my eyelids. Is this a case of mind over mattress?" Thanks for the smiles. :)
From title, to opening line, to ending, I really enjoyed this slice of life story that, I think, we can all identify with. Loved your touches of humor, also.
Nicely written piece for light reading.
Congratulations for placing 15th in level 3!
Noel! This was a fabulous story. I really rate it highly. I wish I'd time to go through all or even half the stories: if I'd found this one I would have commented for sure.