The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for allowing the reader to end the story, without giving us the expected happy ending. This was very well-written.
I like your style. Loved "he wondered if she were typing real words..."
VERY powerful! Wow!
Loved the title... beginning. Even though you don't finish... the title says it all. Blessings, Amy Verlennich
Couldn't wait to get to the end ... where you left us hanging ... but that was right to do so ... will be thinking about that for a while. Hoping that the title gives away the end ... i.e. that it is the beginning of a new stage of life? Well done.
Brenda, I'm just popping in very quickly to let you know that you were in the semi-finals again. You are an excellent writer and this was a powerful entry. I was particularly pleased that you didn't tie everything up with a neat bow at the end. You left it open and the question hanging - very good work. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)