The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this is intense Great job on a very controversial ending. I give you kudos for having the courage to write this story and you wrote it marvelously.
09/18/10
Thought provoking and well written!
09/18/10
This was a good story on the whole subject of abortion. I didn't read carefully enough until I got to the end to realize that Izzy was the unborn child, so I was confused there for a moment. So I went back and re-read it, cleared up my confusion, and was impressed again with how well you wrote this.

Keep writing - excellent work!
09/18/10
At the risk of sounding melodramatic, I have to say this made me feel physically ill. The description was so real that I feel sick for Vivian. Powerfully written.
I had to read the story twice, just because I didn't realize that Izzy was an unborn child the first time. What a difficult situation. I feel for you characters.
Congratulations for placing 10th in your level!