The Official Writing Challenge
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I found this to be moving. You made me feel such sorrow for Contessa, but by the end of the story, I felt hope for her, as well. Good writing!
This is a really deep piece. It made me think how lucky I am to be born into my family. Sometimes you can speak volumes without saying a word. I'm glad Contessa finally found her voice again.
I'm glad your MC decided to speak at the end. This was a tragic story, well written.
Poor kid... would love to hear more of here story! What did she say? How did others react? Then what happended?
Love this one. Your atmosphere was incredible. great MC. Well done!
I agree with Barb, I want to know more. Then too you are good at that leaving me wondering what comes next. Well done once again.
This is really good. I wanted more. I enjoyed the way you developed your main character. Great job.
Wow. This is a great story. Reminds me of a good book I just read called "Paper Hearts". You should totally extend it into a longer story.