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I enjoyed the multi-layers in your story. The mom. The son. and the wife. Also how others fail to see. Well written!
This is a touching story and I loved the feistiness of the MC!
This is a very well-done and evocative piece. I loved the way you layered the story, and nailed that powerful ending like a cherry on top. Congratulations on a great job.
This was great! You explored what the son's deployment meant to different people in the family and each viewpoint gave me a fresh appreciation for the sacrifice being made. And I love the ending - you totally nailed it!

Excellent writing!