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This was a sweet story in light of the MC's condition. I didn't realize how bad off she was until it got near the end. What's beauty if one has not strength of character to accompany it? You painted Marianne as a beautiful woman on the inside and out.
This is great. I was on an emotional roller coaster with the mom. We so want to protect our kids. It was wonderful that the MC was brave enough to go through with it, risking that her feelings might be crushed.
Very emotional! I was quite moved.

You held me in suspense until the end with a twist I didn't expect.

Well done.