The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story, but your opening paragraph gave away the ending. It would've been fun to be wondering with the couple what was going to happen.
You worked the characters really well. Without complicated descriptions you gave me a real sense of each one. Yeggy
I loved the charactors and their names especially creative. This was full of humor..and I liked the rags to riches..also the WAHA WOTEL ending.
God bless ya,
I liked this story and the creative characters in it! Good writing!
Very wry and funny. I agree that you should leave off the first sentence. Your characters are well-written, unique, and believable. Good job!
Linda, this was such a fun, cute story! It was a treat to read. Love, Deb
Now THIS is what I call a real, honest-to-goodness GOOD story! Kept me on the edge of my seat. Kept me interested from beginning to end! After reading so many "blah" type stories, less than perfect grammar, and rather blase'...You Made My Day! Terrific writing! Enjoyable! Enchanting and can't wait to read your other work!